Share this postpoems without parentshaikuCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMorehaikuMarc BrimbleJul 12, 20247Share this postpoems without parentshaikuCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMore3ShareText within this block will maintain its original spacing when publishedcat walks past my foot evening breeze
I like this one, marc. One thought—articles should not be avoided in haiku—an 'a' is needed before 'cat.'
I know you are a seasoned poet, but perhaps not in haiku, like many.
Also, is this a 3 or 1 line haiku? I prefer it as a monokuu.
That's a warm breeze.