Share this postpoems without parentshaikuCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMorehaikuMarc BrimbleJul 18, 20256Share this postpoems without parentshaikuCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMore4ShareText within this block will maintain its original spacing when publishedwhat can distract me except this perfect cloud ...mountain path
Yes, a close to perfect haiku. It lacks mystery which wins contests, but it is 100% haiku love.
Nice...a lovely haiku, Marc.