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Nona Lea's avatar

Really love the implication of cat being liquid--‘cause usually rain collects. Overall I got the sense of “missing out” not only of sleep but of the joys we are accustomed to that the time shift deprives us from

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Marc Brimble's avatar

Thanks for taking time to comment Nona, always appreciated. I guess all the stuff I write is a little melancholic right now, it's that feeling of summer slipping away I suppose

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Jane Hanson's avatar

This sounds nostalgic but also accepting of the changing seasons .The cat nestling on your lap promises cosy Winter nights.Nice work Marc.

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Marc Brimble's avatar

Exactly, trying to capture the change from autumn to winter.

I think most of my writing is tinged with nostalgia.

Thanks for taking time to comment Jane, as always

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