Share this postpoems without parentsMudCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMoreMudMarc BrimbleJul 05, 20244Share this postpoems without parentsMudCopy linkFacebookEmailNotesMore5ShareText within this block will maintain its original spacing when published In the mud beneath the slugs among the roots and fungus sleeping bulbs of tulips and crocus when it is time they bloom
I kinda want the last two lines to also have the final words in each line be "u" words to make an interesting pattern. It might also make the final lines a bit more original as well and emphasize your voice. Food for thought, of course
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