i feel the embrace of all these excellent strangers for a time we are united forgetting we have lives outside of this moment
simple and lovely!
Edited to the essential ...concentrated on a great line which was the essence of the idea.Well done and hi from sunny Yorkshire .
thanks. I thought maybe I had edited it too far
This resonates...
“Embrace / of all these excellent strangers” feels like a wonderful definition of the group experience.
thanks. The piece was originally much longer but I thought most of it really didn't express the feeling adequately. By the time I finished editing I was left with this. Glad you like it.
It’s so hard to kill lines and then it can be so beneficial for the overall story!
simple and lovely!
Edited to the essential ...concentrated on a great line which was the essence of the idea.Well done and hi from sunny Yorkshire .
thanks. I thought maybe I had edited it too far
This resonates...
“Embrace / of all these excellent strangers” feels like a wonderful definition of the group experience.
thanks. The piece was originally much longer but I thought most of it really didn't express the feeling adequately. By the time I finished editing I was left with this. Glad you like it.
It’s so hard to kill lines and then it can be so beneficial for the overall story!