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Jane Hanson's avatar

Ha ...that was a surprise ending !

Goodness gracious great balls of fire .

Finding the humour in the little things .You conjured up the scene of this frail little Old lady really well .

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Marc Brimble's avatar

hahaha glad you liked it!

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John S Green's avatar

Well done! It takes a good bit of courage and maturity to write a naughty wonderful bit of humor. Poetry, indeed. I wish I would have penned this gem.

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Marc Brimble's avatar

what a nice compliment, thankyou

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